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Post by xspyjj on Sept 4, 2011 13:30:32 GMT -5
IGN (ingame name, by which you will be whitelisted):xspyjj Character's Name:Cody Ladson Character's Age: 21 Character's Race (see below):Human A short description of your character's demeanor, style, etc:Cody is very smart but likes to keep to himself because he was bullied by crimson kids. A short biography of your character:His parents died in a experiment with redstone and tnt when he was 3. he was then raised by crimsons. they taught him how to use redstone. He was raised in a desert and always dreamed of boats that dream came real when he his crimson parents took him to the ocean to let him live with other humans at 20. Cody has since worked at a boat dock but experimented with redstone in his free time. Read more: tjrp.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=bios&action=display&thread=457&page=2#ixzz1X0fUJvJb
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Post by Headhunter09 on Sept 4, 2011 15:05:41 GMT -5
Elaborate on everything.
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Post by Ozzatron on Sept 4, 2011 16:46:45 GMT -5
...THERE ARE NO CRIMSON KIDS. Sorry. We only induct adults.
The youngest Crimson member was self-corrupted and is 14.
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Post by xspyjj on Sept 4, 2011 16:58:21 GMT -5
all crimsons are kids at some point. or are they born adults?
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Post by Ozzatron on Sept 4, 2011 20:05:45 GMT -5
Neither. They're inducted into the order as humans and transformed into Crimsons. Read more lore.
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Post by catplanetcatplanet on Sept 4, 2011 20:58:55 GMT -5
I hope there's at least a decent bio this time. This is an rp server after all and from the discussion on his first bio I have doubts about his capability to role-play.
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Post by xspyjj on Sept 17, 2011 9:54:20 GMT -5
wtf am i doing wrong now?
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Post by catplanetcatplanet on Sept 17, 2011 10:28:05 GMT -5
The bio is still really short. Are you in nova or aurora? How did you get there? A shipwright is great and all but this needs more elaboration, as matt said. Look at other bios for inspiration. It doesn't have to be a book like ozz's but you aren't getting whitelisted because this is easily the shortest bio on the forum.
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Post by splamzloard on Oct 26, 2011 14:14:54 GMT -5
I like the read more link. EDIT:: I also like how he contradicts his race in his bio. FAIL. EDIT2::nvm.
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Post by catplanetcatplanet on Oct 26, 2011 15:54:00 GMT -5
Necrothread Mutch?
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Post by Ozzatron on Oct 26, 2011 15:54:57 GMT -5
1) Crimson kids don't exist 2) Even then they would be the ones being picked on 3) This thread can die and burn in hell 4) Any other questions?
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