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Post by nckwntzl on Aug 29, 2011 17:20:58 GMT -5
IGN :nckwntzl
Character's Name: will reggin
Character's Age: 23
Character's Race: crimson
A short description of your character's demeanor, style, etc: will is 1.5 meters tall, wears leather armor.
A short biography of your character: Will was only 6 years old when he went mining for the first time with his father. It was a very long awaited moment for him. When they finally arrived at the bottom of the mine shaft, Will fell into a pit of dangerous redstone dust. His father assumed he had died from the fall and sealed off the chamber. 3 days later, Will broke the seal open, and crawled back up to the surface. His parents, disgusted by his appearance, threw him out of their home and told him to leave town and never return. He was heartbroken and begged to be able to stay, but his father threw him out the door. On his way out, he stole some hooded leather armor from his father (to hide his face) and a sword. After many days of travel he noticed he could easily make an airship from some wool. He spent hours trying to harvest enough wool to build his airship, but he became exhausted and fell to sleep. During his long rest, some kind animists found him and left some wool for his airship. When Will awoke, he saw that he suddenly had enough wool to finish his airship. Since then, he has been floating around near the animist forest.
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Post by Headhunter09 on Aug 30, 2011 11:33:02 GMT -5
More depth. Make the rejection by his parents more meaningful.
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Post by nckwntzl on Aug 30, 2011 12:26:31 GMT -5
fix'd
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Post by Ozzatron on Aug 30, 2011 21:39:43 GMT -5
Why can't anyone be normal?? Didn't we ask for that?
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Post by splamzloard on Aug 31, 2011 7:45:46 GMT -5
Actually, I never saw you ask for that...
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Post by nckwntzl on Aug 31, 2011 8:41:12 GMT -5
Why can't anyone be normal?? Didn't we ask for that? Im sorry, I guess its just the way I felt like writing.
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Post by Ozzatron on Aug 31, 2011 12:01:07 GMT -5
Meh. As long as the bio's good, I guess. But everyone doesn't need to be stuck alone on an island (bland example). Check out Gigglesplat's bio for a good example of somebody being normal but also on an adventure.
Not to say that this needs to be changed.
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Post by Headhunter09 on Aug 31, 2011 21:04:22 GMT -5
As long as there are no more amnesiacs. Wling.
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Post by Ozzatron on Sept 1, 2011 21:34:00 GMT -5
FTFY
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