dragons bio (2)

[dragongladiator]

dragongladiator in game

char name: rhynock

char race: crimsons

i am a 13 yr old buy working hard in slave forges all the time i am friendly and have the magic ability to summon Redstone,(5 min cool down) and i look like a normal boy ragged clothes and red(stone) smeared over me in forges i was worked by a slave driver. I escaped when the factory blew up. I was found alone in the woods by the crimsons and taken in. I have amnesia because of the fumes from the factory, so that is all i remember factory>boom>found by crimsons, so far i have been just a normal person living with the crimsons, but then they figured out my DNA had been Redstone-infused allowing me to summon Redstone,the summoning takes it out of my DNA every 5 minutes the DNA repairs itself so i can do it once more, i am not trusted with any tool above iron because i was only found not born into the crimsons,


OK so that is it i edited

[dragongladiator]

this ok?
if not i will just add here \/
i reaallyy wanna join

[dragongladiator]

HURRY UPAND READ IT PL0X

[Headhunter09]

First of all, patience is an important thing to have during this process. I am not on 24 hours a day reading bios.

Second of all, you still haven't followed to guidelines for character bios. You need to write a paragraph or two on your characters history. That is, explain the story of his life.

[conzocrafter]

Look heres the lowdown, I can tell your eager to get in because you understand this is an amazing server ^_^, thing is, 8 new members joined in a matter of hours and you by far weren't the first. I'm not saying it's a matter of who gets there first though. All these members have to some extent followed the criteria. Every new person's new bio is to some extent short, thats ok, but maybe you should take a look at some of the older bios.

[dragongladiator]

ok i was in forges worked by a slave driver i escaped when the factory blew up i was found alone in the woods by the crimsons and taken in i have amnesia beacause of the fumes from the factory so that is all i remember factory>boom>found by crimsons, so far i have been just a normal person living with the crimsons but then they figured out my dna had been redstone-infused alowwing me to summon redstone that takes it out of my dna every 5 minutes the dna repeairs itself so i can do it once more i am not trusted with any tool above iron because i was only found not born into the crimsons

[ersake]

Where are the periods?
Also, you can edit your main post.

[Headhunter09]

Put that into the opening post and add correct punctuation.

[Headhunter09]

Ok, sure, why not. Whitelisting.

[dragongladiator]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!